Which statement is the best evaluation of this paragraph?
The paragraph is sound but needs more supporting
evidence to be complete
The paragraph does not have a topic sentence, so it is
only partially complete
The paragraph needs to be completely revised, since it
lacks focus and clarity
The paragraph is less effective after the first sentence
because of its disconnected ideas.

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Answer 1
What paragraph, I want to help but what paragraph are we speaking of?
Answer 2

Answer:

a. The paragraph is sound but needs more supporting evidence to be complete.

Explanation:


Related Questions

Briefly compare and contrast the reactions of Hamlet, Laertes, and Fortinbras to the deaths of their fathers.

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Answer:

Hamlet's Reaction:

Hamlet mourns deeply for his father when he gets to about his father's death from Claudius. He decides to fake madness for revenge, and wearing that mask, he calmly analyzes every detail, every action he has to take for the revenge of his father. However, he starts to hesitate and comes to the conclusion that revenge is not a good option.

Laertes Reaction:

Laetes also grieves for his father's death and chooses to take revenge. Unlike Hamlet, he was fully driven by emotions and was easily influenced, he didn't analyze any detail or actions he had to take for revenge, which eventually led him to death by his own sword.

Fortinbras Reaction:

Fortinbras was also driven be emotions, but he had no grief for his father. He was only driven by the desire to get the crown, to get victory at any costs. In the end he was also not crowned like Hamlet, which was a shock for him

Good morning, afternoon or night, i hope all of you are having a good day. :D
Here is a poem.
You may still be
A bit sleepy
But its time you
Smelt the coffee
Life will wiz past
In a hurry
You'll waste it
If you become lazy
Just hold my hand
Don't worry
Let's ride together
Like besties
No matter how
Tough or twisty
Life is awesome
When its you and me...
Good Morning
This is a good morning poem, hope you like it. :D

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Answer:

good night :) thanks for the poem

Answer:

Explanation:

its very good poem

Which of the following statements best describes a foreign policy issue?

A problem that affects every citizen on a single continent
A problem that cannot be contained within a country’s borders
A problem shared among people living in the same country
A problem related to an endangered habitat class

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Answer:

A problem that cannot be contained within a country’s borders

Explanation:

The best answer is the second one because that is the best answer compared to all the other answers that don't make sense.

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What is the most important thing to remember when beginning a story?

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The main idea of the passage.

Answer: Hope this will help you.

When beginning a story, it is most important to have a main idea of the passage. When writing it, make sure to always keep the main idea in mind so your story doesn't go off topic.

which details show that dean was serious and passionate about his inventions?

which details show that dean was serious and passionate about his inventions?

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Answer:

He used his money to buy more equipment

He worked on it after school

Explanation:

Hope this helps:D

Answer: c d and f

Explanation:

because it makes since because everything he makes goes toward his inventions. brainliest plz:)

if you see this and it is not 8 am or later..... gO. tO. beD. before i call your parents/gardian lol

if you see this and it is not 8 am or later..... gO. tO. beD. before i call your parents/gardian lol

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Answer:

I apperantly do not get it sincificly when fractions rub toghether moudles shall cerate as in zip lines. Hope this helped!! I know it didint!!

Explanation:

Answer:

huh?

Explanation:

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Please help the is dew today

Please help the is dew today

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answer is d. the passage states "that's confirmation bias", which shows what the example given is about. the main purpose is therefore to inform the reader what confirmation bias is by giving an example.

Answer: hope this helps ♡

D) to show the reader what confirmation bias is.

Explanation:

The answer is clearly D, because there is an example written in the passage which shows or helps the reader understand what confirmation bias is.

YOU CAN HAVE ANY THREE THINGS THAT YOU WANT.
IN RETURN YOU MUST GIVE AWAY THREE THINGS THAT ARE ABOUT THE SAME SIZE AND IN GOOD CONDITION.
WHAT DO YOU GET?
WHAT DO YOU GIVE AWAY?

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Answer:

I want an xbox

100 dollar xbox gift card

PS5

Explanation:

My old xbox one s

My xbox controller

And the cords

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Read the following passage from "What Does American Democracy Mean to Me" by Mary McLeod Bethune and answer the question that follows:

As we have been extended a measure of democracy, we have brought to the nation rich gifts. We have helped to build America with our labor, strengthened it with our faith and enriched it with our song. We have given you Paul Lawrence Dunbar, Booker T. Washington, Marian Anderson and George Washington Carver. But even these are only the first fruits of a rich harvest, which will be reaped when new and wider fields are opened to us.

Which of the following is the best paraphrase of the above passage?

1. America is like a great farmland of amazing people doing amazing things. We have given our gifts to help this country grow and we will continue to harvest.
2. "As we have been extended a measure of democracy, we have brought to the nation rich gifts. We have helped to build America with our labor, strengthened it with our faith and enriched it with our song. We have given you Paul Lawrence Dunbar, Booker T. Washington, Marian Anderson and George Washington Carver. But even these are only the first fruits of a rich harvest, which will be reaped when new and wider fields are opened to us."
3. Democracy is great and we're glad to be part of it. We're glad to help America grow with our work, our religion, our songs, our authors, and our inventors.
4. Mary Mcleod Bethune says that when democracy applies to her people even a little bit, it's been great for the country. Their hard work, their religious faith, their songs make America stronger. Paul Lawrence Dunbar, Booker T. Washington, Marian Anderson, and George Washington Carver are all amazing parts of this country. But there will be even more greatness when they have more rights.

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Answer choice 4…………………..
Def number 4…………………………..

Every house should have a dog. They are cute, loyal and will protect your house. What is the author's purpose?

A)Persuade
B)Inform
C)Entertain

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It’s to Persuade the reader to by a dog because it lists the traits of them and why you should have a puppy.

Which question would apply to a fiction text?(1 point)

Who is the person being quoted in this section?
What is the conflict in this part of the text?
Why are these diagrams included?
What importance did this experiment have?

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Answer:

I belive the answer is "What is the conflict in this part of the text"

Explanation:

Chapter One Part One Quote Analysis:
Directions: Read the quote and answer the corresponding question.
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“...he flicked the igniter and the house jumped up in a gorging fire that burned the evening sky red and yellow and black.” (Bradbury 1).

What does this quote tell us about the nature of firefighters in this society?


“the books went up in sparkling whirls and blew away on a wind turned dark with burning”(1).

It seems the firefighters are burning books. What do you know about the deeper

meaning behind societies burning books? What might this mean for this fictional

society?


“So many people are. Afraid of firemen, I mean. But you’re just a man, after

all. . . .”(3).

Considering the first two quotes, why might people be afraid of firemen?


“Do you ever read any of the books you burn?”

He laughed. “That’s against the law!” (4).

Reading books is against the law, predict what you think a society would be like that is not allowed to read or learn information on their own.


“‘You think too many things,” said Montag, uneasily”(4).

The protagonist Montag is made uncomfortable by his neighbor. Why does this

conversation and all her “thinking” make him uneasy?

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Answer: Try your best!

Explanation: You've got this. Your pretty smart.

Sorry if these answers are wrong, I’ve never read the book:

1) Firefighters in this society stray from their original duty to put out fires, and light them instead. This shows that they are more concerned with destroying than saving.

2) Throughout history, societies have burned books as a way to repress/hide knowledge from others. So, in this fictional society, they may also be attempting to hide information from citizens to to control what they know.

3) People may be afraid of firemen because of how dangerous they are. They burn books, so they may burn other things too.

4) A society that cannot learn on their own may lead to many ignorant people who know little about the world around them.

5) Not sure about the plot

P.S. try to put this in your own words

What are THREE reasons to communicate plans before hiking?

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So you would not get lostSo u can be preparedand you'll be sure about what's going on

Read the passage from an argumentative essay.

"The Columbian Exchange was bad. It had many effects on native peoples. One of these effects was disease. Disease harmed people. It led to death. Some say up to 90 percent of native peoples died.”

How should the passage be revised to create a more formal tone?

Slang terms should be removed.
First-person pronouns should be added.
Simple sentences should be balanced with more complex ones.
Long and complex sentences should be split apart and made shorter.

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The Columbus Exchange was a very negative event that had many impacts on natives for what I can see. A very important and major impact this caused was a spread of a disease called smallpox. This disease infected many people part of their community as lead to death in many causing there population to decline quickly. People have even been said to believe that 90% of the natives who got infected with this disease died which can show that it was very deadly. Lucky we do not have to worry about this horrible disease.

Simple sentences should be balanced with more complex ones. This way the passage be revised to create a more formal tone. Thus, its C.

What is a passage?

A passage is either the full work of literature or a selection from it. A passage is technically just a piece or subsection of a literary work, whether it be fiction or non-fiction.

Notwithstanding some claims to the contrary, most passages are at least one paragraph long and frequently multiple.

Some paragraphs mix quotes from various sources together and might not have a clear focal theme of their own. Yet, a passage typically gives a well chosen extract that can be taken to have some form of deeper meaning on most test portions.

In a nonfiction chapter or limited story in a work of fiction, this deeper meaning may be expressed as a thesis or assertion.

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whats a sysmbol thats present in untwine

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Answer: identity and grief

Explanation:

Bc a young girl had to cope with the devastating loss of her best friend and twin sister (they had a terrible car accident and died)

Answer:

identity and grief

Explanation:

A young girl copes with a devastating loss, this happens when a sixteen-year-old Gizelle Boyer loses her best friend and twin sister Isabelle in a terrible car accident.

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Explain how different settings established different moods in Stave 1 and Stave 3.(A Christmas Carol)

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Answer:

u need an explanation?

Explanation:

It depends on where they are
(I’m not sure saw this answer elsewhere)

John Adams was the smartest President.
FACT OR OPINION

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Answer:

opinion

Explanation:

an opinion is a view or judgement formed about something,not necessarily based on fact or knowledge.

Answer: Opinion

Explanation:

In the readings, a claim is made that higher biodiversity means a more sustainable ecosystem. Cite reasons and evidence from the texts to support the claim. Also, cite what you may already know about biodiversity to support the claim.

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Answer

Higher biodiversity means a more sustainable ecosystem

Explanation

Biodiversity means diversity in the living flora and fauna in the ecosystem.

Higher biodiversity assures different genetic pools and widespread of populations that are adaptable to various variety of conditions.

These conditions include changes in climatic conditions and the spread of diseases.

The prime example of this theory is the survival of the Homosapiens from the other Homo species, like Neanderthals.

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So I’m trying to write a short take away about this poem I read, but I keep making it too long. Please help.

The risk you took may come with many backlashes, the decision you chose stays in your mind. But later on, you may begin to appreciate the risk you took and the benefits that came long with it.

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Answer:

 

Explanation:

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There are many kinds of boats—canoes, cruise ships, ocean liners, and sailboats to name a

few. They all have one thing in common: They are vessels that travel on water. Today, different

kinds of boats are used to transport goods and people, and they’re also used for fishing and

recreation. Boats have a long history and have existed long before planes, trains, and cars.

Boats have brought shores closer together and helped people connect for thousands of years.


The First Boats


Before boats, people tied logs together to make rafts. They stood on the rafts, moving, and

steering them with a stick. Eventually, people began to make dugout canoes. They carved out

the inside of large logs to make canoes. The oldest canoe found is over 10,000 years old.

People used rafts and canoes to get from place to place and to fish. People started making

reed boats over 6,000 years ago in present-day Egypt. They were made from reeds, or grasses

found in wet areas. People made reed boats to travel on the Nile River. They used oars to move

the boats, but ancient boats weren’t just powered by people. Their sails used the wind to move

down the river. People used the boats to move and trade goods. A few thousand years later,

Egyptians started to make boats out of wood. In 1000 CE, the Vikings started to build long

boats. These big ships carried up to sixty people, who all used oars to power the boat. The

Vikings traveled from Scandinavia to parts of Europe and even North America in the longships

to explore and conquer new land.


A dugout canoe A reed boat


Language Arts Grade 5 Page 2 of 4

Ancient Boat Innovations

Boats were similar for thousands of years, but changes

did happen over time. Until about 2,000 years ago, sails

were square. Then Arabic and Persian sailors invented a

sail in the shape of a triangle. About 1,000 years ago,

people in China added rudders to their ships. A rudder is

at the back of a ship and is used to steer, or turn, the

boat. These boats were used in warfare and for moving

cargo from one place to another. People started using


ships with three and four sails on one vessel in the mid-

1400s. Europeans and the Chinese used these ships for


battle, to trade goods, and to explore the land on

different continents.


Language Arts Grade 5 Page 3 of 4

The Power of Steam


The Industrial Revolution and the invention of the

steam engine changed boats in a significant way.

In 1819, the first steamship was built. Steamships

used wind and steam power. Coal was burned in

the boats to produce steam. In the mid-1800s,

ocean liners traveled long distances over the

ocean. They were powered by steam and used

propellers instead of sails and rudders. They did

not need the wind to move. In the 1800s, riverboats

were powered by steam and had a big

paddlewheel at the back. In the early 1900s, steam

was replaced with diesel power, which means boats used oil instead of coal. All of these

inventions allowed people to travel faster and farther, connecting people in different parts of

the world.


Modern Developments


In the 1980s, container ships were made to carry large

amounts of cargo. Large steel containers are stacked on top

of each other on the deck. This allows a lot of objects to be

shipped at one time. Up to 1,000 containers can fit on one

ship.


Although the first cruise ship departed in 1900, vacations

on cruise ships didn’t become popular until the 1990s.

Hundreds of people can fit on a cruise ship at one time.

Stores, restaurants, and swimming pools are on the cruise

ships. People can get off in ports and visit far-away

locations and have fun on the boat while they travel

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Explanation:

What are other ways of saying 'According to my research,'?

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Answer: as stated in _, as reported by_, in accordance with _

Explanation:

another way to say according to my reasearch is research suggests

9.
Match each example of figurative language with its interpretation. (10 points)


1.
"He watches from his mountain walls, And like a thunderbolt he falls."


2.
"I'm only a child yet I know we are all part of a family, five billion strong, in fact, 30 million species strong and we all share the same air, water and soil."


3.
"I have seen flocks streaming south in the fall so large that they were flowing over from horizon to horizon in an almost continuous stream all day long."


4.
"As long as I live, I'll hear waterfalls and birds and winds sing. I'll interpret the rocks, learn the language of flood, storm, and the avalanche."


5.
"O if we but knew what we do When we delve or hew—Hack and rack the growing green!"

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Answer:

C goes to 1

D goes to 2

A goes to 3

B goes to 4

E goes to 5

Explanation:

I took the test (FLVS)

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Answer:

1.c 2.b 3.e 4.a 5.d

Explanation:

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In the two essays that make up Mandatory Volunteer Work for Teenagers, what is each writer's point of view on teen volunteerism? What can you infer about the writers’ values (what they care about most) from the reasons and evidence presented in the Point and the Counterpoint? Compare and contrast the reasons and evidence presented in the two essays. Which essay do you think makes the most convincing arguments? Write two paragraphs, using textual evidence to support your opinion.

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Answer:

Teenagers today live in a confusing world. The media sends many mixed messages about

what it means to be a helpful person in society. One of the best ways to help teens find their

way is to make volunteer work a mandatory part of their school curriculum. Some people

would immediately argue that this is an unnecessary action—many teens already volunteer

without it being a requirement. It’s true: teens have a propensity to volunteer more than

adults. However, as a society we should make sure that not just some, but all, teens

volunteer. Many of the teens that volunteer do so as part of a religious group or a youth

leadership organization. In fact, 46 percent of teens who volunteer are working with a religious

group or a youth leadership organization while only 18 percent of teens who volunteer are

working with school­based groups. This shows that clearly the best way to include all teens in

the benefits of volunteering is to add mandatory volunteer work to the school curriculum.

Explanation:

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Casey at the Bat: A Ballad of the Republic Sung in the Year 1888 by Ernest Lawrence Thayer Poetry, 1888

Introduction

Ernest Thayer (1863–1940) was an American poet who published the poem “Casey at the Bat” in The San Francisco Examiner under the pseudonym “Phin.” The poem’s anonymity and association with DeWolf Hopper, who recited it 10,000 times on the vaudeville stage, led to many false claims about its authorship, and only reluctantly did Thayer eventually step forward to claim the poem as his own. By then, it had become firmly imprinted on the American imagination as the quintessential baseball poem, full of hope, drama, bravado, defeat, and humor. Though some readers may be unfamiliar with at bats and innings, everyone can relate to the final sentiment: “there is no joy in Mudville—mighty Casey has struck out.”



Using context clues, what is the definition of quintessential?

a Not important
b The most important
c Unrelated to a certain subject
d Representing the perfect example of something

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As the poem was recited 10,000 times, the definition of quintessential is D

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Paragraph 44 is “what’s in your sock drawer besides socks?”

Based on the story, what is the most likely reason Maureen asks Joe about
his sock drawer in paragraph 44?

A. to show that she and Joe are both secretive

OB. to see if she and Joe share the same hobbies

o C. to lead Joe to a realization about how the mind of a writer works

o D. to help Joe connect the books she has written to moments in his life

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A I think,based on the the question “what’s in your sock drawer besides socks?”

Respuesta:  c) para llevar a Joe a una comprensión de cómo funciona la mente de un escritor

Can anyone write me a poem about walking in the rain? Thanks :)

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WALKING IN THE RAIN

Walk with me to find a clover,

It times of sun and rain,

Share with me your laughter,

Which echoes down the lane,

Walk with me to find a flower.

In times of hurt and times of pain,

Walk with me during the showers,

And make it great again.

Here is a simple poem that you could just edit just in case if you want to. Just make sure that it seems right to you.

I walk outside and smell an aroma, unique and alone.

Fresh lillies, a sense of purpose, the scent brings me hope.

But as a large puddle of mud winds up on my shoe, I can’t help but groan.

The rain isn’t always good; yet it tends to lure me in like a tight constricting rope.

I enjoyed the walk, but it wasn’t my own.

For when the rain comes mud follows suit, and eventually I can’t cope.

Please Help Me With History!!

Please Help Me With History!!

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All of the answers should be in the edited photo.

I actually had a lot of fun researching these people, so thanks!

Please Help Me With History!!

help me finish the alliteration: analyze and complete I nee help with the blank ones​

help me finish the alliteration: analyze and complete I nee help with the blank ones

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13•Vanessa’s Violin was Vibrant
11• the ripe red strawberries were rich in taste
7• polly painted pretty pictures different shades of pink
Polly painted pretty pictures passionately

The suffix -ful in forceful means what

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Answer:

CAN u take a picture of the question

Both words originate from “Force”. However they change their meaning when adding “ful” or “ible” as a suffix.

chinese food or korean why (my journal entry)

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Chinese food tend to have more oil than Korean. Traditional Korean food is similar to traditional Chinese, however Korean tend to have more dry salty seafood & pickle vegetables. North American Chinese food tends to be greasier and is sweeter than traditional Chinese (traditional tend to be saltier).

Answer:

my opinion would be korean food

Explanation:

korean food has lots of variations that i personally like, there's also loads of spicy food and lots of and they also have side dishes, they're basically dishes that go with full meals. :)

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